Mum and dad had been missing for a while . They were supposed to land at the ancient gold mine but that’s where I was and I searched over and over and I couldn’t find them…..It didn’t take me long to figure that they were lost somewhere…. On the news last night I saw the exact plane land somewhere else and that was when I got the package with the note. At the time I thought it was a very early birthday present…But the package had mum and dads voila! Then I read the note. call this number 0276892433 immediately .
From,unknown sender.
This is really good Kenzie – I love how you have included all the words in such an interesting way. I hope you put this on the 100wc site.
wow great ending i love how you left it at a cliff hanger
Wow I love this writing. It’s very mysterious and structured. Love the cliff hanger.
~Molly from OIS
wow this is really cool i love the ending and how its suspenseful