A loud crack of a whip rang out. The chestnut yearling, Ash jumped with fright and gave out a fear full whinny. A dozen wallaby’s sprang out of the trees and watched cautiously. There herd walked away from the whip but yet more men with a strange smell of smoke were up there too. Ash and his mum, Amber, hid behind a tree and gradually, things started to move and stir. The wallaby’s went back into the trees and stayed, the smell of smoke was gone and Ash and Amber came out from behind the trees the herd was safe.
Wow – this is full of suspense Kenzie. I love the start of your piece – it grabbed my attention straight away.