As we disappeared into the night,I took one look back and said nothing, what had we done.
Stealing the simple lolly was easy because you won’t be chased for the rest of your life. But when we realized what actually had done we knew we were wanted, and we were right only 2 days later there were signs everywhere saying dead or alive and our reward would be $10000.
It was broad day light and we went down to the river for a drink, and out of no where a arrow whizzed passed us all
and hit the tree right by us.
Wow Kenzie, what a tense little story and I really like the way you created the tension without saying what caused it. Perhaps it was the not knowing what you had done that created tension but, it is certainly there! I like very much the sudden ending that leaves the whole story open for more. Excellent work, well done